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The feel of his breath on my neck
The touch of his lips
The rest of the world and all its problem's just fall away
We are the only ones in the world
Lying side by side
Listening to his heart beat
Soft and relaxing music to my ears
And can be felt deep with in my soul
Time just mealt's away to nothing
Lost without him, lost with him
Never knew that his could happen
To a person so lost in a sea of darkness
With no hope of anything
Yet now i have been saved
And re-opened my heart to the world
You never know what will be thrown at you next
©2008-2010 ~eyes-wide-shut11
:iconeyes-wide-shut11:

Author's Comments

this is not a me thing to do
i rarely write romance stuff
but hey must have been in a good mood
by anyway its short and to the point
if u like it im happy if u dont i dont mind about that either. but this is one thing that i want no advice about thanks

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:iconcoopnkai:
I actually like it...but erm isn't the fourth line is a little diverting and breaks the pooem into two tangents!
Although love the srnse of literature used

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Be silly enough to believe in miracles, but don't wait for them. Because the things you wait for hardly come along. :blackrose:
:iconeyes-wide-shut11:
thanks :)
yer but it couldnt all be about one thing, i needed some of me back in it
:iconcoopnkai:
Awh well how about chaning it in havin a little variable topic cause the title then refers to the first three lines :) although it's totally your wish!

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Be silly enough to believe in miracles, but don't wait for them. Because the things you wait for hardly come along. :blackrose:
:iconeyes-wide-shut11:
ok i didnt completely follow that
:iconandrew555:
:clap:

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Andrew says:
Foiled again by my arch-nemesis: Child-proof packaging!
:iconhippievan57:
i have a hard time expressing emotions...you did great :D

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~peace, love and groovy stuff~
:iconpuinkey:
Sweet !! ;)

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A good art is a balanced art . Try flipping your art horizontally .
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:iconeyes-wide-shut11:
aww thanks, happy u like it
and thanks for the fav :hugs:

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